In the seminar we did are usual peer assessment of a section of your essay. The only suggestion given to me was that I could go into more detail about who is putting the money into football the allow the big money signings and other such things. We then used the diagrams to compare with the people we were sat with to see if their diagrams could be related to our work in anyway, one of the ones I was shown was about the sales of Adidas each year which could be useful if the data was more refined to be specifically about football.
