Friday, 7 April 2017

Essay Session - Thursday 6th April

This was the final session to get any feedback on the essay before its final submission. Previous to the lesson I completed the essay so as much of it could be marked as possible. The general feedback that I received was about concluding points in more detail and to rework the conclusion slightly so that it directly answers the question. Other than this the rest of the essay was deemed to be up to a reasonable level.