Artefact Paragraph - Thursday 15th December

This weeks seminar was very much like last weeks seminar in the fact that we brought in a completed independent learning task, a paragraph about an artefact relevant to the essay which we plan to write. We then peer assessed the paragraphs within the group. My only piece of feedback was to remember to make it completely clear how the topic that I am writing about directly links to the world of design. It took me one sentence to then amend my text in accordance to the feedback. Then after this like last lesson we watched sections of films or film trailers which we then had to use various writing techniques to summarise.